FOR IMMEDITATE RELEASE
Oct. 5, 2010
John Williams
100 North Main St
Logan, UT 84321
Dear Mr. Williams,
Learn financial independence through educated passive income Thursday, Oct. 7 at 7pm Cache Valley Chamber of Commerce. The Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) invites everyone to attend the first meeting.
If you want financial independence, then it is time to learn about passive income. Passive income is an income received on a regular basis, with little effort required to maintain it. It is the relationship between assets and liabilities. For passive income to be beneficial, you have to be smart about investments.
“Rich Dad Poor Dad” author Robert Kiyosaki says, “If you do not know what you are doing, no asset can make you rich. Ultimately, what makes you rich is your financial intelligence. Your greatest asset is your brain—so take care of it and protect it from bad advice.”
CVAIA wants to help educate members of the community in making wise investment choices. You should not have to work for your money. Make passive income work for you by attending CVAIA’s meeting Oct. 7.
If people learn the right mentality and approaches to investing, they can all be successful in what they desire. People should be able to spend their time doing something they love, not just a job that provides an income. Passive income largely makes this possible. There are many organizations with the stated goal of helping people understand the relationship between assets, liabilities, income, expenses. They practice the methods found in the ideologies of books including Rich Dad Poor Dad, The Wealthy Barber, The Millionaire Next Door, Atlas Shrugged, The Automatic Millionaire, and The Secret.
Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) teaches people how to increase passive income. CVAIA embraces the Law of Attraction, Law of Abundance, and Law of Exchange. CVAIA began in August 2007 and now has members from many geographical locations and from all walks of life. The members come together with the same belief: that education mitigates the risks of investing.
For more information or to arrange an interview, contact Robyn Statum at 435-786-3902.
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Robyn,
ReplyDeleteFirst, I have to tell you that your background is awesome! I love it!
Secondly, I really liked reading this. It was entertaining and packed with information. Make sure that you do an introductory paragraph, so the pitch feels a little bit more individualized. You're off to a great start! Good luck! :)
-Tessa
This sounds really good! My only advice would be to pitch it directly to Mr. Williams a little more in the beginning. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteGood job! I would only suggest to add a paragraph directing the pitch to the guy you are writing it to. Other than that awesome!
ReplyDeleteRobyn,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your post. Here are a few AP style mistakes that might give you a better score if we quickly fix them
On the address at the top north is abbreviated to N. Your first sentence is a little unclear to me. Maybe rephrase to it “by being educated on passive income.” Pm should have a space between it and the 7 and it should be written p.m. put “at the” or something before the location before Chamber of Commerce. The first sentence in the second paragraph is an opinion, which is ok because it is a press release, but you want your press release to be good enough to be a news story. So either make that a quote, or say something like “Learning about passive income can help you gain financial independence.” In the third paragraph I liked that you pulled quotes from the author of the book. Great idea!! On all your book titles you need quotation marks. I would make your call to action more direct to ensure you the media takes your pitch. Instead of saying contact me for more information say when and where you want to set up the meeting, whether it is 30 min before the club meeting or a separate time.
Great job on your paper. Keep up the good work.
Kayla